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A Story about Phones-Rachel-

*Today is a story about our family which happened today*

It is a story based on real situation, but used in a formal way😀


There is a student called Rachel. Her older sister is Michelle.

Today was kind of special to them. Today was the day that their mom told Michelle that she’d get an i-phone SE2.

Michelle was surprised because she was having a gongshin phone, which has no internet. And the i-phone had the internet. Now, Rachel was also happy. She had got the gongshinphone that Michelle had used before. So Michelle had this phone because she had to do the jagajindan when she had to go to school, and she had to show it to the teacher. And with a gongshinphone, she couldn’t do that. And because Michelle had an i-phone, Rachel could have a gongshinphone. And one week later, Michelle got an awesome phone case that she can put her bus card in.

And today, Rachel’s mom got a new I-Phone too! She got a purple i-phone 12! It was so pretty, and we all looked at the shining phone. Except for Rachel’s dad’s, they all had new phones!

However, Rachel had a problem which was that her phone couldn’t download messages(Real Situation). So she had to only use pictures already taken, or some pictures that were still there while Michelle was using it. So today, the shiny i-phone was opened, and it has been loading since 7:27.




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Anna Kim
Anna Kim
May 12, 2021
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And the 읔ëȘ…회원 should be stopped

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Anna Kim
Anna Kim
May 12, 2021
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Yup

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