persuasive essay

Hello, my name is Daisy and I wrote about what adults don’t know or care about kids especially students, but really, should. Most adults think in a much different way than how children, including teenagers think. Adults often don't know how children REALLY feel and REALLY think. This often causes most of the stress to children. Some adults understand that young children can’t be perfect in education or etc., but they are rare. Children can’t be exact perfect and think the same way as adults, or feel “the proper way”. I believe that adults have to try more to understand how children feel. There are probably more than numerous things adults don’t know about children, but I would like to explain briefly about what adults have to know about children.

To begin the first idea, we can’t always be good at something, and at all subjects. Students can’t always get certain scores in all subjects, and always get high grades in schools and academies. For instance, most of all parents usually want their children to always get over 80. This made 80 an average of almost all exams and tests all over the world. Students who can’t get to the average score always struggle. This isn’t fair, as children think, because it matters on the human whether he or she studies well or not. Studying doesn’t always make he or she study well all the time. Not even HARD studying. I believe adults have to, and should make a balance between studying (includes homework….) and free time for young children. Education IS a must for all human, but it isn’t always homework and hard study. To illustrate, I think education has to include study, experience, free time, and communication all together.

In addition to the first idea, most children really “don’t like” getting forced by adults to be polite or getting compared to a much better person, which they always do. Getting forced by adults most of the times makes me feel like I’m not me, or takes away freedom. I don’t think comparing a person ever makes anyone any better. For instance, according to my experience, when my parents compares me to my smart and quiet sister, I feel like ‘what does she have to do with me’. I wish I could express all my furious feelings sometimes, as many children would. Adults certainly should NOT force or compare kids to be or do like someone.

To lastly conclude, adults should understand more about children. Children can’t be perfect at all times, and adults- who don’t know should absolutely understand it for children. Children can’t be good at everything as most adults expect, and also, adults, especially parents should not expect from children more than most children can be by themselves. I hope adults will try more to help and teach their children more than expect from them.