Persuasive post!

This is my blog post about a persuasive topic, which I think is an important topic to many schools in Korea. The topic is "Should electronic devices be used in schools in Korea?". I think that e.d.'s (electronic devices) should be used in our education because the internet is a very wide search engine and it allows students to search for things they don't know. These days, there is only one teacher for each class, and if everyone is sitting straight up and raising their hand to ask a question, the teacher will have a hard time spending his/her career time. It will be much better if the class has tablet PC's and search for things they don't know. Although there is a problem with doing some things that shouldn't be done with the tablets, such as playing games at study time, I think it is just a perfect idea to use e.d.'s for our education. Everyone wants their child to get a good education and be a great and famous person. Also, these children can learn how to use e.d.'s, which means that they will do well in Computing class. This means that there is just one change, but there are more than one good things, which means that this is a good thing for our society.

Now, I will again explain the good things about using electronic devices in schools. Everyone, what year is it now? It is 2018 right now. It is not 1818 or 1918, where technology wasn't improved that much. We cannot just leave technology to improve. I think that we have to use a little of this technology because I think it is 'the time' that we can use our human abilities and make our worlds better. I think using these awesome devices can make our school life better! It is not just better for you as in education, but it isn't it fun, just using these things? Our school has tablet PC's for all of us, (students) and we actually like tablets so much that we ask to use these! Even I want to use these fabulous 'lumps of technology' every day in school. For all of those students who don't use e.d.'s in school, I think that a change needs to be made. I'm saying this because using these devices isn't just good for the students, but all of the people in a school. If you are a teacher, you can chat with each other using a chat room. If you are a student, it helps you learn and gives you new information that might be needed later. Looking at this example, using e.d.'s is clearly a great and important thing to do for our education.

In conclusion, I think that using e.d.'s help our education in many ways. I think that using e.d.'s will be a good thing to make our class, school, or country, better. Also, I repeat that it can be helpful to everyone in the school. I hope that many of the people who read this blog post have a real think about the benefits of using e.d.'s for education. This thing is important to every single student who is in school! Please think that this thing is positive, and will help the world!