PERSUASIVE WRITING

Hi I am Kyungmin and I am wanting to persuade people that there isn't any boys gender or girl gender jobs. In the past there was a thing about only boys could do studying and only girls should do cooking and cleaning and housework so I think it is unfair I think that it is unfair for a person to clean when even there isn't a rule about girls doing the work and boys should do all the work and earn money I think that girls can earn money and the dads can be able to do the cleaning and making the food and housework and see there child grow. The other gender might be better at when they swap jobs. For example the mom might be better at making money so the family will get more rich and the dad might be more good at making food and cleaning so the child will grow better they will get happier and will live better. I also I think that there are both people so they are same in a way so I think you shouldn't compare with there genders I think that you should think it like think it like the black people and white people we are kind of diffrent but it doesn't matter. People say that you have at least one benefit or something you are good and I think that thing could be something the other gender could do. For example a boy ballerina or a ballerino was really good at ballet and there are many boys that are good at cooking and there are more boy chefs than girl chefs.I think that both boys and girls can do anything. Also the person might be good at doing the thing that the other gender does so hey could be better so it would be better. I think these days are getting better at making it fair because there is girl police officer and a boy doctor helper and other things that are likely to be a genders job but the other gender is doing it.I think it will get better if boys can do things that usually girls do and girls can do thing that boys usually do. If we do it like that we can find some better talents. It will be fairer but sometimes people will say you can't do this because you are a girl or you are a boy do it and I think if we try the belife about boys should do that and girls should do that could disapeer. I think it will become a better world because boys and girls can do varites of diffrent jobs so there will be more chaces of being better I think when you hire someone you shouldn't think of the gender you should hire someone by testing there knowledge and skill. I think in the future you will see improvement of comparing boys and girls so you will see boys doing housework and also girls do housework to. Also you will see both boys and girls doing work and the genders will do ythe same things. Thank you for reading.