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OBEDIENCE SCHOOL+THE GREAT YELLOW INVASION (MADE FOR BOOKWORMS) P.1

yoonseomargaret

Updated: Apr 27, 2021


The Plane starts the alarms.

Erin (Me): (Screaming, falling down to the floor) ACKKKKKK!!!

Yuria: (Panicking) Hold on! The plane is CRASHING!

Iro Hector(The Pilot): (Shouting, pushing down all the panels and buttons on the front seat) HOLD ONNNNNNNN!!!!!

BEEP!!! BEEP!!! BEEEPPPPPP!!!!!!

Erin: (Shrieking in rage) Do you even have a license, Iro?! ‘Cause I think it’s illegal to kill people fifty feet above the air in a pla-AAAKKKK!!!!

Iro: (Spitting and shouting) Contain yourselves! Stay away from the glass!!

CRASH!! KABLAMMO!!

A billow of dust and sand covers us and we jump out through the broken glass. We are out in a large wasteland, filled with broken glass chips (mostly from our plane), and where strange sword noises come from a mysterious castle a few yards away. I look down at my hands, which is coated with blood. I’ve never had this much blood come out of my own body; I quickly wipe it on my pants, and rush out of the broken-down plane. Yuria and Mina are curing the people who got hurt, which includes Iro, who broke his wrist.

Chris: (Screeching while Mina dabs his bloody back) Ow! This landing was rough, Iro!

Iro: (Shaking his head sadly) The plane is damaged, Yuria.

Yuria, who has learned how to fix these kinds of things for a long time, nods grimly, and goes to the back of the plane. There are a few noises of tankerings, and small explosions, before she comes back, wearing a dark expression.

Yuria: (Sighing heavily) The vessel is heavily damaged, and we’re out of oil. So we can’t go back to the Temple of Colors right away.

Mark: (Panicking, stammering) N...now we a...are stuck he...here?

Mike: (Stamping his feet on the ground, cursing) DAMN IT! I wanted to get ice cream…

Yoonseo: (Shaking head in disbelief) Is ice cream your life???

Mike: (Almost crying) Yes….

Savina: (Pointing) Oh! What's this bag?

Mina: (Shaking her head) Huh? I never saw that……

Savina opens the bag… it has-

Savina: (Excited) GOLDEN POTATOES! We’re RICH!!!

Erin: (Confused) Golden potatoes?

Mina: (Intelligently) Maybe we should trade those for food and shelter in this land.

Savina: (Smiling mischievously) One golden potato for me?

Chris: (Shaking his head) Ehh, sure.

Mike: (Chanting) ICE CREAM!!

Yoonseo: Stop your screams about getting ice creams, Mike.

Mark: (Embarrassed) Ignore him, he’s crazy.

Bera: (Pointing) Hmm….. that looks like a….school….?

Erin: (Scratching her head) Uhh…. I saw schools but never like this one.

Yoonseo: (Enthusiastically) That looks like HOGWARTS!!

Bera: Hello? Is anyone there?

Two girls come rushing out of the school. They are wearing long pants, and are sucking on some strange...wait...KIMCHI??? They are also holding GUNS, which is probably a bad sign.

Erin: (Frightened) Huh…?

Savina: Whose THAT?

Bera: (Flipping open the Magic Map) I’ll check the map, you guys have your colors, you can use colors to defend yourself. And besides, black-’n’-white is ought to be a great defense against enemies.

Mike: (Excited) Ooooooo! Do they have Ice-cream??

Everyone: NO!!

Mike: *Sob*

Yuria: (Looking into the map) Excuse me, but… what is this place? It’s not on the map...seems like we’re lost…

Mina: (Somber) Sorry if we’re bothering you… can we pay you with golden Potatoes for shelter and food???

Caroline Brown: (Snarling) We’re not gonna be paid by what-a’-golden POTATOES! Besides, ask the school properties if you’re students, which you don’t look like (you don’t have your own Stockings, for one thing)! Now, let us go back to our fierce debate whether or not we should drown Thomas’s Canarie into the lake full of squid-wait...BLOOD??

The girl hurries over to me, and grabs my hand, which is by now, drenched in blood. She squeezes my hand, and an excruciating pain passes through the tips of my fingers as I have never felt before. I screech as a lightning bolt seems to erupt inside me.

Caroline: (Laughing) Whoa, whoa! Poor girl must’ve been hurt severely...probably from a mud wrestle? Boxing competition? Oh, I know...sword duel!!

Erin: (Shaking her head vigorously) Nooo, actually, our plane just cra-

Caroline: Oh, none of that! Let us go inside! My name is Caroline Brown, and this is who is supposed to be my “Associate”, Sussana Obervine.

Sussana Obervine: (Waving hand) Hii…

Yoonseo: (Pointing at Caroline) Wait...she…

Yuria, Sussana, Yoonseo, Caroline: (Yuria pointing at Sussana, Yoonseo pointing at Caroline) (Sussana pointing at Yuria, Caroline pointing at Yoonseo) SHE LOOKS LIKE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sussana: (Sweating) (Looking at Savina and Mina) Gosh, that girl in the beanie looks like Delia, and that girl in the braids looks like Cora!

Cora buddle: (Coming out of castle) Who looks like me?

Mina: SCREAMMMMMM

Cora: (Eyes popping) OMG what is happening to me

Suddenly, everyone is thinking that everyone else is the enemy; everyone except for Caroline, who seems to be impressed by the amount of blood and bandages on everyone's bodies.

Caroline: Oh, c’mon guys, they’re not doppelgangers or anything.

Sussana: (Flapping her arms) You think they’re DOPPELGANGERS??

Caroline: Shuttup if you don’t know anything about ‘em, jerk. Come in with us! Dale Bark (Daniel) will probably let us borrow the dueling basement for a few days, and Kayleen Arc’ll give us her keys.

Sussana: (Worriedly) But Agni said that Kayleen doesn’t like lending other people her keys, Caroline.

Caroline: (Shaking her hand) What Agni Beekin says isn’t important. She’s a girl who exercises in the morning with that whip of hers! At any rate, YOU said that we have to be kind to strangers!

Sussana: (Glancing at the others) Okayy…but give us those golden potatoes, will you? We’ve been living on Kimchi ever since the chef Lucas Cooke stopped serving us cold bread.

Savina: (Nodding head vigorously) Okay!! But you don’t need all 50, do you?

Mark: (Disbelieving) You counted all of that already??

Savina: Well, yeah

Chris: (Doing dab) Yess!! Victory!! So, is the basement cosy?

We walk down the field, and find a brown-haired girl standing at the front step of the school. She is standing in front of the gate with a black whip decked at the front (obviously from Agni Beekin), and holding a ring of keys.

Mike: WOW she is pretty

Mark: You are so weird, bro.

Yoonseo: (Disapproving) Why is this becoming a ROMANCE story all over again?!

Cora: (Dreamily) I loveeee romance novels...I have a lot of them at my home.

Mina: (Whispering) She isn’t like me at ALL!

Kayleen Arc: (Looking suspicious) Caroline? Sussana? Cora? Who ARE these guys??

Sussana: Well, they got lost in this land while traveling; we think they’re students, or if not, The Warriors of the West.

Chris: Noo, actually, we just want some food and shel-

Caroline: Shhh!!

Kayleen: (Looking at Erin) SHE certainly looks like the Long Lost Warrior of Memories...do you have any weapons?

Erin: (Dumbfounded) NO?

Kayleen: (Sighing) You don’t have any powers?

Erin: (Shrugging her shoulder) Not really...except for colors. Mine’s black-’n’-white and I don’t know why everyone is making a big deal about it.

Kayleen: (Gasps) Black and WHITE??? In 50 year-

Erin: (Exasperated) I know, I know! It isn’t a big deal!

Mina: Actually, it IS a big deal. Black and white has only come out when the Last Warrior pressed her hand on the Coloru Crystal...in one prophecy, it said that both warriors of the color Black and white will come again in 50 years and save the world from destruction.


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yoonseomargaret
May 03, 2021

Apologies to Tei, for making some strange ROMANCE scenarios about her😅

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