Reviewing the fictional story I wrote.

That thing. The thing that I wrote about. The fictional one. Yeah, that one. The one about the wolf. Uhm, I will be reviewing that thing. Now that I look at it, I feel like it can be better. Like, a part of me just wants to fix it. Uh, now that I think about it, The clans' (clans? pack? I forgot) names are like colors. Just... no. I could have taken the time and thought of names but no. I did not. Like for example, the Winter clan (pack?) And yeah. I got that from my name Tei the ARCTIC Wolf. And it did not have many twists and turns. If I wrote it right now, I would make it so that every woof would disagree with Her. Her being Luna. I think that's her name. I don't exactly remember. Also, I would have made it so that she would have a horrible past. I know that that sounds horrible but it would be more interesting. Right now, it is not interesting and everything works out for her. Also her clan/ pack. But now that I look back, I could have fixed a lot of things that I have never noticed before.