Mr.Patrick told the class about a giant Teddy Bear fighting with one of the students, Tei. His action of telling this story was an example of using ‘nouns and verbs’ and describing a short period of time and using sensory languages. So, let’s continue the story.
The Teddy Bear roared and growled at Tei, its pointy and yellow teeth wobbled. The gooey spits were oozing down his chest and spraying out as some of them got on Tei’s face. She swiped the liquid out of her face and suddenly pulled two daggers. It was short, but pointy. It was a matter of a second that she lunged toward the furry giant. The 20 feet-sized Teddy Bear hit the ground with it’s furry and gigantic hand. But, it was slow compared to Tei. She slided between the bear's wide legs. She climbed on to it’s back and started stabbing. White cotton came out as the leather of the Teddy Bear was tearing down. The beast roared it’s scream of agony and pain. It started to shake to fall Tei off. She fell to the ground. Both of them had fires in their eyes. They stared at each other for a long time. They were panting for dear life. But, it was Tei who started the action again. She ran in front of the bear and punched as hard as she could on its nose. The Teddy Bear lifted her from the ground. Her daggers were too short to harm the bear. She was getting close to the giant’s mouth. Suddenly, Tei put two daggers together and made a long two-sided sword. She cut off the thick arm of the Teddy Bear. As the Teddy Bear was screaming and surprised that he had lost his hand, Tei saw the moment. She jabbed her daggers toward the monster’s heart. The battle had won. The Bear fell to the ground, its face in disbelief.
That was a very good story...please don't bring daggers to PEAI Tei;;
Bye bye Teddy bear!