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Timekeeper(Epilogue+Chapter 1)

irenehyuns10

Updated: Nov 20, 2021

Epilogue: The rules of Timekeepers:

  1. All timekeepers will follow these rules, and must agree at all costs to become a timekeeper.

  2. One must keep everything timekeepers do to anyone, and they shall receive a severe punishment along with the ones who were told the secret.

  3. Timekeepers have control of the people they were chosen to guide, and will not try to take over the life of another one..

  4. Do not try to mess up time.

  5. It is allowed to contact other timekeepers, but it is not allowed when working.

  6. Wear your timekeeper necklace at all times, as it is to show you're a timekeeper.

  7. It is not allowed to listen to the pleas of the people.

If any of these rules are broken, the punishment for all timekeepers at all costs are severe.

-The timekeeping headmaster.


Chapter 1: Wrong thoughts

Somewhere in the ancient times, all people were free to control their life. They did anything with their time. Everyone was happy, and did what they wanted. Some people would work, some people would play, some ones would spend time with their loved ones. The ancestors thought it would be all great to just take away the person's right to control their own lives. Wrong thoughts..

They created the timekeepers, to keep people's time. Everyone would live in order. Time keepers would control everything. It wasn’t allowed to control what you do. You must do what they say, and follow the rules. If not, punishments are harsh.


It’s useless to keep dreams anymore, since the Timekeepers choose everything for you. Nobody has dreams. Well, some people do… like me. I want to have a job that would let me be free. Maybe an artist, or a musician. Anything that does with freedom. Well, I keep them to myself, since everyone would think it’s only just so useless.


“Just keep a little bit of your dream to yourself, it may be useful!”

That was the last thing my mom said to me before she was taken away by the black people, just because she didn’t follow the time. Foolish foolish foolish.





( andddd Homeworke!)

Play ground

The dark green trees, that were about tall as the building, closed my sight of the apartment. The breeze passed by and there wasn't a lot of people except me and my friends. On the right, there were those a bit rusty Silver See-saws and 4 slides colored with bright red and dark blue, held by black structures. There was a ceiling to that. They were a bit dirty, and a bit scratched. The floor was made out of red and green rubber tiles.

( the end!)

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Ian Chung
Ian Chung
Nov 15, 2021

Oh, and isn't it actually Prologue, not epilogue-epilogues are supposed to be at the end of the book :)

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irenehyuns10
Nov 16, 2021
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Oh- My mistake! I just thought epilogues were like kind of that stuff!

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Ian Chung
Ian Chung
Nov 15, 2021

Good story-I look forward to chapter 2 of it!


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irenehyuns10
Nov 16, 2021
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Thank you😎

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