Welp, It's a story from younger me

Well.... I created a story when I was in 4th grade... Welp, I tried recreating it... Here it is, the story of a weird disaster:

Hello! I’m Stella. I'm a bunny living in the forest village. I like musicals, shows, you name it ! Well, when I was younger you see, I saw a musical titled the moonlight. It was about a deer traveling to find the lost moonlight. I felt most entranced! I wanted to try it too! So when I heard there was a new musical being held in forest school, Of course I wanted to audition! Well, it was pretty essential for me to do so. The musical was called the Nature Trios. I tried out for one of the Trios, Lin, the rabbit. I tried and got in! I got the role Lin! I was congratulated by my friends. I was happy. At first, nobody was good at the roles, even me! But through practice, eventually we became good! But one of the squirrels,Lily, frequently missed the practice. I thought it was only a petty problem. She didn’t have a very important role anyway. She was just a fairy only in 2 short scenes. Nobody thought it was a threat to the musical. But on D-day, the problem started. On the vast stage, We played our parts. The musical went pretty well, as the songs, tonight, breakdown, burnt, passed by. But in one of the songs,Wonder, a disaster happened. Lily had to sing may wonders be in you, but instead she sang may thunder be in moons! And she forgot the rest. She was in deep, deep trouble. She was humiliated in front of everyone. All the animals laughed and Lily shrunk away. Later, I heard Lily saying “Oh..I should have remembered to go to the practice…” Now, Lily learned she should remember something you have to do. And I learned that little problems may become very VERY big.

Wow! I.... wasn't very good at writing! I improved! Yay..... (This isn't a good thing... is it...?)

Welp... Bye!