So, you know, I've been doing my Aqua and Chaos for about a week or over that, I suppose, And I want to hear your comments about this story I am writing. I've been writing until Chapter 16, The Prophecy of Atlantis.. I'm not so sure about the whole Prophecy, and I lack ideas about what should happen in the middle of the quest.You know, I am so thankful for all you guys for loving my story, creating a fan club, making logos, etc. And I also know that you guys are very disappointed(or not, if you aren't) that I am not writing Chapter 17. I plan to write it on Thursday, 'cause I rest that day.
Anyways my point is, I want to know about your thoughts, plans, ideas, comments, and how I should go on with this story. The comments can be negative for my story, but don't be so harsh if you were to write critically about my story. Where are you going to write your comments? On the google docs of 'Aqua and Chaos.' Before that, I want to give you a tiny peek on Chapter 17.
Chapter 17
Okay, I have to admit, my head was spinning.
Matthew, Autumn and Sally, who really had a few words until they came, peeked over my shoulders and read it. I could here some gasps from them, though terribly, due to my lack of verbal intelligence(got that from my google translator while I was doing Mrs. Helen's homework) I could not understand this language, and I was sure that it was not- I mean yeah, it's English, but it was hard for me to understand.
"Orm?.."
"Yes, Jake, what is it?" Orm had a very peaceful look on his face.
"What does this mean?"
"Oh, maybe you didn't listen well to Aquaman, nor Aqua the Dolphin."
"Yep."
"Looking at your friends' terrified faces, I can see they understand it. Anyways, I'll tell you. So, this first line means...(Chapter 17 to be continued)"
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